Take my hand so I can put all this behind us

还有，不要以为长句子就代表水平高。
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还能看懂意思啊，呵呵

高 高 高 呵呵

比我的水平高!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Share things unconditional deseving appreciated!

这都是高手啊，这儿潜水也是乐趣

For having a good future in my life,I have been struggling for that to this very day.
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I have been struggling for my future day by day.

' c9 w/ ?# R& Z+ ]The character refers to EQ and IQ，while the IQ which changes little after my teenager years,EQ seems that should have a continuous learning.
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& N( i) R$ F- M& vAs the character of IQ and EQ, the former was formed in teenager age and the latter was not.

感觉不是很地道，读着别别扭扭的，不过我自己就写不出来了，还是需要多多学习！
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! P3 _4 o" C# y  l/ bforgive my past dazed and confused 感觉后面不该用dazed and confused ，而应该用相应的名词，词性不对是其一，意思也不很对，不知道你究竟想表达什么意思，拙见而已。

回复就能加分？

引用第17楼gogagaover于2008-01-10 10:59发表的 应该这么改 :
斑竹我不怕得罪你，我觉得你是中文的直接翻译。
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我认为，写英语要按照老外的习惯去写，不要用中国人的表达方式去写。

呵呵，我怎么会怪罪你呢。
# c6 v. b5 o/ M9 q3 k$ D1 a$ h以后要多来英语版块发言阿。谢谢你的指正。送上金钱表示感激。