Take my hand so I can put all this behind us

还有，不要以为长句子就代表水平高。
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; x6 Y4 m; U" B4 a, N  C: e短小精悍的句子运用起来非常漂亮。

还能看懂意思啊，呵呵

高 高 高 呵呵

比我的水平高!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Share things unconditional deseving appreciated!

这都是高手啊，这儿潜水也是乐趣

For having a good future in my life,I have been struggling for that to this very day.
这句话不如:
I have been struggling for my future day by day.

' ^+ f- Z% j4 B0 pThe character refers to EQ and IQ，while the IQ which changes little after my teenager years,EQ seems that should have a continuous learning.
5 L7 e) b$ C1 {. d8 A& l& [这句话不如:
7 B/ b& x" ~- V2 Y# A( ^As the character of IQ and EQ, the former was formed in teenager age and the latter was not.

感觉不是很地道，读着别别扭扭的，不过我自己就写不出来了，还是需要多多学习！
提个小意见
forgive my past dazed and confused 感觉后面不该用dazed and confused ，而应该用相应的名词，词性不对是其一，意思也不很对，不知道你究竟想表达什么意思，拙见而已。

回复就能加分？

引用第17楼gogagaover于2008-01-10 10:59发表的 应该这么改 :
  V0 L) h" t% V- }" A, \! ~" X! p斑竹我不怕得罪你，我觉得你是中文的直接翻译。

; s' L# d7 c. e7 `1 h$ h3 H, h$ S我认为，写英语要按照老外的习惯去写，不要用中国人的表达方式去写。

呵呵，我怎么会怪罪你呢。
" z5 R1 b' I2 Z* V以后要多来英语版块发言阿。谢谢你的指正。送上金钱表示感激。