Take my hand so I can put all this behind us

I am always curious about my life in the future.
What will it be?
Who will come into my life then?
No one will know about it.
What I can do is to walk ahead and enjoy it.
I may play a role as an individual, a son and a student, and each of these rol
es is important to me.
Having grown up from a little boy to a strong man, I came through many kinds o
f experiences involving both ill-being and happiness.
I have been struggling to have a good future every day.
And also I must be ready for every changes that are necessary for me to fulfil
& I8 D6 \& {  R9 E( ml my dream of being a better person.
"The survival of the fittest" encourages me to strive all the time, but for my
: ]3 R0 ]  k5 E; R; Z  D& I selfishness and ignorance, I made many mistakes.
Frankly speaking, I experienced failures from many aspects, such as school wor
k, love, interpersonal communication, and so on, but my great confidence consi
7 ~) }- \! }& O/ hsts not in falling many times, but in rising every time when I got many acquis
8 p$ y: R% @/ L. [, u, \1 Iitions that will benefit my future life .
2 q. J% ~8 @$ m! N" b! C; q1 g6 gI strongly believe that each of my failures will be conducive to enhance my ch
ance to succeed at the next attempt.
And I always value these failures which take the adverse conditions for me to
understand more about life, which take loss for me to appreciate the things th
at I still have them.
Character determines destiny which influences my life.
The character refers to EQ and IQ, while the IQ changes little after my teenag
/ v+ \5 p9 u) p0 I! ker years, EQ seems to deserve continuous learning.
In the past years, because of my ignorance, daze , and confusion, I made many
1 K5 @6 v% F# L9 x7 V mistakes and offend a lot of people.
I want to say: sorry!
+ n/ F4 d8 z! qAs time flies, now I have become a man who thinks carefully so as to be respon
& M1 J$ {6 o1 {8 fsible for my saying and doing.
Though having many shortcomings, I do appreciate my dear friends who tolerate
me，forgive me, and help me to be a better man.
I will try my best to rectify my mistakes. Thank you!
And in the university, I can develop myself in many aspects.
The university offers me a large amount of opportunities to learn.
I have been more insightful to the society, nature as well as life and formed
my own thoughts on these subjects.
the university gives me a great chance to learn how to get along with others.

Since being far away from home, most college students may experience a tough t
ime which is an significant turning point in their lives.
' F1 Z' l4 N+ n. B) VAfter overcoming some challenges in universities, I get along with smart and d
iligent classmates quite well now, and I can learn a lot from them. We share t
" z% u# N# ]6 A. P9 a. She experience, knowledge and views.
, a, T1 Y# v! I( d6 _2 C6 hthanks to these great friends , I will never feel lonely. They help me to find
- \: O& A. z( _8 A2 g my strength and weakness.
I also learned how to cooperate with others in the group work.
' |* ^8 a9 j, n- jBesides, I joined student organizations and participated in some activities to
improve my interpersonal skills, which is also crucial to the social communic
" W. I; V" h- b0 m5 Eation.
I strongly believe that if there were no clouds, I would not enjoy the sun, if
there were no rocks in its bed, the stream would have no song.
5 m! Q$ |' Z# _  V5 a* SBenjamin Franklin asked himself two questions every day .
"what good shall I do this day?"
"what good have I done today?"
- y8 {6 n3 H3 WThese two questions guide me in the path to become a surefooted and humble per
son.
" u1 `. ^* W& t* h1 ^& wAt the end of my speech ,please let me quote Bob Dylan’s blowing in the wind:

% l& K- \& P; N" k" OHow many roads must a man walk down before they call him a man?
7 g/ W4 Z! Y+ ?7 {. s( PHow many times must a man look up before he can see the sky?
How many years can a mountain exist before it is washed to the sea?
The answer, my friends, is not in the wind
6 o+ j! D$ m* S4 v; ethe answer , my dear friends, Is in my heart…
And in university
I have learned , experienced and
  S- o, T- S; Y  U* F+ fmatured.
Thank you！My dear friends！
Thank you！My Alma Mater！

文章写得不错
2 L4 z+ g% x7 d+ m7 B6 A: g  s一看就是中国人写的，呵呵，有些语法和词汇用的不很贴切，当然了瑕不掩玉
所以还请坛里英语高手加以修改润色，所谓帮助别人、提高自己、共同进步。
admin会有丰厚的奖励
1 a, g. w2 x8 o+ R, f9 S% B
4 R+ {) ^3 ]' e  _5 C3 T# g: k+ k那些成天叫穷的战友切记：免费不等于不劳而获，还请稍微花点心思看看别人的帖子，力所能及地做点贡献。 在论坛里没有金钱和威望很正常，那些既没有金钱和威望又不肯通过自身参与论坛讨论获得且大声嚷嚷没钱的个别战友请尊重他人的劳动成果，最起码也得礼尚往来吧。

是的，
5 U& w, U  y3 C  t4 g1 nchinese english
0 w* L9 F- n( m% w' a希望坛里的英文高手来帮忙润色一下。
1 p% v  S2 s6 W% b+ N! e) z奖励多多。

好的意思传达出来就可以了 何必再改成好看的英文画蛇添足呢

这样就不错

对啊，为什么一定要改成范文呢，我们并不缺少范文啊，那样会了无生气，也没有那么原汁原味了啊？

我的水平还没这么高，能看懂就不错。

刚刚看懂

写的很好了,我要是能有这水平就不愁过六级了,

我觉得写得不错！